Oh my goodness, what a wonderful story you've written here! If I had been sitting down while reading I can assure you I'd have been on the edge of my seat, especially during chapters one and two. I mean, god, the build up to finding Rodney and then when they finally do! Oh, my woobie. I loved that you used the whole team and Lorne. And then the showdown with Kolya--you did it justice when the show itself never managed to. And then that first kiss and the misunderstanding that follows. Angst! And and and! *flail*

Thanks for writing this. :)