I'm glad you liked it. Yes, your advice about a few of the details was really great and I think by making those changes, it seemed more believable and a better story - like in the shack with Rodney and at the beginning with Lorne. Thanks so much! ::hugs::
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Date: 2007-08-25 10:10 pm (UTC)